Yep, I'm back from the evil weekend at home with family. Like I said before, I predicted that computer time would be reduced and I was right. After my essay was done, I got about 70 minutes in three sessions of about 20 minutes to write some more. It's not like I didn't want to. If I could have, I would have finished the first draft. I did get to sleep in the woods and visit my grandmother, so it's not like I got bored. Either way, I have written 1000 more words and I will show some of them. Since last chapter had little to no dialogs, I will show you some. As I side note, I noticed that, where dialog is included, I seem to be less confident and glamorous in my writing. It's probably related to the fact that I suck at talking and that I prefer to sit in the background and observe. (shrug) Enjoy!
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" [...} She captured us with the ball and she is our master. It's important to obey our master. When she tells us to fight, we must fight. When she tells us to sleep, we must sleep. When she tells us to go in the ball, we must go in the ball. [...]"
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I will try to do more tomorrow. I should be successful this time... I hope. Bye!
4 comments:
This latest entry was awesome! AWESOME! More! I want more!
I can't tell if you are joking of if you are serious here. I will go the safest (and most negative way) and say you were joking.
Wrong! I was insulting you! Take that!
(sad sad DPL)
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