I had nothing to do today, so I wrote the rest of chapter 13. It had been hard and long, but I did it. Now, it's currently being proofread, though I will have to revise it later. Meanwhile, I will start writing chapter 14, to get ahead. Chapter 14 is a cool chapter, better than 13. How can I know that? I don't. It's only an opinion, or maybe an intuition, since I wrote 0 words on that chapter. Oh well... I'm going to pick a random excerpt from 13 again and throw it here for my own enjoyment.
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When he looked up at her again, he had successfully hidden those thoughts and focused more on actually answering her. "I'm not rodent either, I'm Sparktail." he told her a bit innocently. "But you can't really be scared of something, can you? You look big and strong and scary, to me. You have nothing to be scared of, I'm sure. If I was you, I know I wouldn't." he stated, trying to ease his own bad feelings by making her feel better.
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Yep... so off I go to write 14. Ciao!
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If I was Sparky, I'd want to be Kagai, too.
Once again, Kirby took the words right out of my mouth. Like, before I even thought of speaking them. He's good.
But dude, buddy, chum, you should revise your chapter FIRST before offering it up to Pika-fan for proofreading. You're going to make all new mistakes during the revision process. Best to make all your mistakes at once. You heard it from me.
Everyone wants to be Kagai, it's nothing new.
As for the proofreading thing, he is doing a very light proofreading. Like correcting the most obvious grammar problem, without going into details. Anyway, I take the time to get ahead a "bit" on chapter 14.
Said "pika-fan" would like to be referred to on a first or full name basis, thank you very much. As for chapter 13, my light proofreading is done. You're free to revise it. Now, to read chapter 14! Mwahahaha!
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