Friday, September 12, 2008

Last review responses ever... for Fractured Bond.

Hello everyone.

First thing comes first so... I hate this new keyboard. It makes me miss more key than every before and it plain sucks. So if you see even more typo, blame the keyboard, not me. Now, if anyone want to say anything more about Fractured Bond or discuss the end of Sparking Chaos, there won't be anymore place than comments to this entry. I doubt anyone will want to say anything, but I'm free to reply to anything related to that. So... happy commenting.

--- (five weeks later... I can be distracted sometime... <_<)>
Kagai's review responses

Kirby: Jen is dead? Really? I didn't think she was, she's just lost in that bad place. It's sad. I like Jenee a lot too. She's like Jen a bit... it's been so long since I last saw her... Sparky said she's dead, but I never understood why he said that. I think he just wants to make me sad. He's mean. I put as much effort at being myself, but Ricky isn't really a good writer. I think he sucks. (grins) he must be so mad right now. I think it was a great story too. I still wonder what happened to Jen... I guess I will never know... bye, Kirb!

-Kagai

P.S.: (growl to make you move away from Jenee and nuzzle her)
P.P.S.: It would have been funnier if Jen was there to laugh too...
P.P.P.S: What?

Foxyjosh: I was sad too. Hope to see you again one day! (grin)

Rodon Ashby: The ending wasn't ruined. Don't you think having a kit is a great thing? Sure, I'm very sad because Jen is gone somewhere and I never got to see her again, but she taught me a lot of things and if I see her again one day, I will tell her how much she helped me. (smile) Don't be sad... everything is not perfect, but I liked how it turned out. Other people seem too. 

As for the writing, I never wrote anything, but Ricky seemed sad when he wrote it. I think it was because he wrote sad things, but I could be wrong. Maybe he did write a lot of nice things with nice words. Maybe he is not a bad writer. He did give me a daughter. (smile again) I hoped that you still liked the story. See you again soon in Sparking Chaos!

P.S.: Hehe... shocking things is Sparky's department.
P.P.S.: It's ok... sometime I'm sad too. We can't always like everything. I sure don't like Sparky. But the important is to like things as a whole for what they are. Pikachu make good food, for exemple...

Ampere: Yeah... I'm sad that Jen is gone too. Everyone seems sad. It's saddening me. I will have a moment of silence, for her. (have a moment of silence) Done... I hope to see you again some time.

AltoGuardian: Why does everyone keeps telling me Jen is dead? I feel like people know something I don't. It's making me feel paranoid. Are people hiding something from me? I hope not, since I have been so nice to them for a while. If Sparky is lost, I don't care, but I don't want the humans in black to win. They are scaring me and I'm sure they would scare my daughter if she saw them. (read the "forgive" part, despite not being able to read. Plot hole?) Hehe... I think that was one of those mistakes with words Ricky often do. Like that time with warm instead of warn. They are funny. (laugh at me) Good to see you like to read about me. I hope to see you again in SC soon! (tail wave)

P.S.: That is very sad.

JonseyCat79: Thanks for feeling the emotion Ricky put into that story. It's not always fun to tell sad things, but someone had to say them. Thanks for believing in me and Jen, too. I like it when people believe in me, because it gives me more courage to raise my daughter alone. My mate was... well... I'd rather not talk about that. Bye!

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This is done! Finally, it took me 5 weeks, but I did it. I'm so cool. Oh well... it was nice to write that story and now I will focus on finishing Sparking Chaos. That thing needs another proper ending.

Ciao!

-DPL

9 comments:

Kirby Oak said...

I don't remember what I said that Kagai replied to... Ah well... (Is pretending nothing happened to Jen) I'm sure you'll see her again, Kagai. She can't just disappear off the face of the Earth. Hm... Maybe we should go and look for her together!

DarkPokemonLover said...

Kagai: Yay! I will bring Jenee with us, so she can see my friend when we will find her!

Sparky: Someone should just tell what really happened...

(slap him) Don't be so mean! She would be sad if she knew.

The wheneverly Kaz said...

This makes me so curious...

But congratulations Ricky!

Kirby Oak said...

Yeah! I would love for Jenee to come with us, and I’m sure Jen would love to meet her. (Glare at Sparktail) You can’t come.

DarkPokemonLover said...

If you are so curious K.A., you could read it, it's only roughtly 4 chapters long, according to my usual standard for chapter lengths.

Kagai: (go get Jenee and returns)

Jenee: We're gonna see a friend?

Sparktail: No, because your mom ki-

(knock Sparktail out and drag him away)

Jenee: Huh?

Kirby Oak said...

(Smile at Jenee) Yup! She might be a little surprised to see Kagai, but she’ll be really happy to see both of you.

DarkPokemonLover said...

Jenee: What is the human talking about, mommy?

Kagai: I have no idea, but he knows where Jen is, so... (follows you)

Jenee: Ok! (follows under Kagai)

Kirby Oak said...

(Smile and walk off toward Cerulean, nonchalantly using the time gun to open an invisible portal into the universe and time of T2T)

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