Chapter 13 posted!

OMG! (or any other deity) I posted a new chapter! Yay! I mayu have dragged this blog out of the unknown! Yay! I have apply juice! Yay!

Alright... enough celebrating, let's go to the bulk of the subject. As you probably know by now, I posted chapter 13. And as you also know, It took me 3 months before posting it. Well... this doesn't reflect reality. The true is... I am writting chapter 16 right now, but I can't post them. Why? Because I have problems with my proofreaders and University made it so I didn't have time to organize things to go more fluidly. If you look at the earlier entries of this blog (they have a few goodies, too), you will see that I plan to write the rest of my story during the next month. As of such, this blog will see daily updates about stuff and things, if people participate. I have chapter 14 proofread and I will send it for a final proofreading. If I am lucky, it will be posted within the next week. Also, next Friday, I will change the question of the poll, so you only have one week left to vote on it.

Now that this is behind me, here's the fabled lost Review Response section, for your own enjoyment (and mine)

Foxyjosh: Well... you got it wrong. While it's true that eevee can evolve by happiness, like in the games (the same is true for pichu), I don't have it exactly the same way. A baby pokemon can evolve if they are old enough and really wants it to happen. Usually, it happens through group rituals, but Kagai had it a bit different, as you will see in this chapter. Oh well... nice try anyway.

HelKat: Interesting hypothesis concerning the stuck in the past thing, but it's not her case. At least, it's not what made her evolve. The farmer things isn't true, but isn't entirely false in a way, but doesn't really matter as it comes to her real enemies. But, with those guesses, you win the number 2 spot in my contest. Congratulation! By the way, Umbreon is also one of my favorite pokemon, hence why it is in my story. The real reason for her being there though is because the character have been created long ago, not long after Sparky was made.

Kirby: Stop refreshing my chapter! Nah... it's alright now, since it counts visitors with that new nifty tracking option on FF.net. Jen isn't mad at you for not celebrating her birthday, since she didn't celebrate yours either. Oh... here's Miya! She likes your ice cream. *Miya shrinks you and place you in her ice cream.* Hehe... now... yeah, I don't like gore much either... maybe. Well... I don't feel like responding to all those Post-Pre-Scripts, so I will do an abriged version: (hit you) I was talking about stuff and I sometime get tired too, so you are not alone. Good. Now it seems that I reached the actual review, at long last! *holy music* Let see... yes, I know that fire doesn't need a spark, but I needed some kind of analogy. Yes, Kagai is really cute (pet her). Yes... it's /really/ a shame she's not an espeon, though pichu are /much/ cuter (grin). Well... she was preprared for living in the wild, but was more at the stade of her life where she played games. She was about to learn about the real stuff, but... (the plot ninjas are staring at me) ...anyway... next point. Kagai thinks that everyone is weird, because she's one cynical umbreon, so it doesn't mean Jen is weird because Kagai says she is. No, Kagai doesn't want to be an eevee again. Go play with Thirteen! (read point about Sunny smelling the umbreon's scent.) Err... look, ice cream! (point left and run away to the right) Oh well... thanks for saying my chapter was good! (hug the Kira-you) You know, you were hugging too many people and pokemon at the end of that review. You probably hurt some of them. Oh, by the way, I posted this in one big paragraph because I am evil.

Tyler: Yeah, Magic was cool while she lasted. (skip big paragraph) Now... yeah, the first part was mystic and unrelated. I love to go offtopic, like that time I was at school and that guy asked me a question and I... (ramble for 20 minutes)... so yeah, I love to go offtopic. Yeah... highschool blew up that innocence for me... oh well, not really... but it's still reasonable to feel sorry for Kagai. She had it hard. Gory details are cool. What's wrong with people not liking it? (people stare at me weirdly) Err... yeah, it's going to be fun when those two meet. Though, Kagai personality is not that childish. You should meet Thirteen. That's a real crazy girl. Will we see L and S again? I'm going to answer now: No. They suck and are unimportant anyway. I hope I didn't frustate any reader here. I will try not to take so long with next chapter... oops... I already did. Sorry! Sorry! Sorry!.... Sorry!

AltoGuardian: I wouldn't become an author, because English isn't my first language. Well... I might if I do go live in the USA one day, but until then, nawww... Ok, to the actual response. Well... we have something in common, we don't like Rick. But, I tell you something (since I have written chapter 16), don't hate him yet. Well... yes you can hate him, but not really. I mean... it's kind of hard to explain, but you will see clearer later on. Jen is cool, yes. It's a shame that... (is kidnapped by the plot ninjas again) Plot Ninja: Congratulation for winning the guessing contest. Your prize shall be revealed when the time will come.

Voila! I hope you enjoyed those! Funny enough, I notice that I revealed Kagai's name before I made sure you had read the chapter... oh well... I'm sorry about that. Please leave comments! I will happily reply to them all.

-DPL

Matters of writing and slow internet

Hello again everyone! I know that I said that I would post once a day and that this is my second entry today (or the first of the two tomorrow, take it like you want), but I felt like talking about stuff. I am back from 7 hours of sleep and I feel much better, even though I will go back to sleep soon. In a few hours, the Beiing (I probably screwed up with the spelling, sue me) Olympics Games will start and with it, lot of talk about sport and stuff. Well, I want you to know that I will be able to participate in my own marathon. At the last minute, I decided to bring my computer home, which mean that I have access to a word processor and a computer without Internet, so I can work on it anytime I want, for how much I want. Which mean, you will have guessed it, that I will be able to work on my story and, since that's the only thing that's fun to do here, I will work on it a lot. If I keep this motivation, I might be able to write the rest of the story during this month of reclusion at the heart of the forests in Quebec.

Speaking of writting, I must thanks K.A. again for being so fast on proofreading my chapter (after I had to threaten him for him to do it ;) ). I love the changes you made and I hope readers will like then as much, when I will post it before 5PM today. The next entry shall be posted here at the same time as my chapter and this shall blog finally fulfill its purpose.

On a side note, Internet here is slower than a snail going uphill during windy weather on a frozen and slippy icy floor. I hate it already and it seems to be slower than ever before. To give you an idea, it took me one hour to: check my e-mails, check U website and post here. So, let's all take a minute of silence and think about all the nasty things we could do to dial-up Internet if it was a physical entity.

(10 seconds later)

Ok... bad thoughts right there, so I'm going to stop. Oh well... bye!

All-Nighter, Vacation and whatever...

Hi, people!

I am returned from school, the place where reports are written and security is pain and night are sleepless. Well... guess what?? I'm not coming back there until next Jenuary! Yay! Now, I today went to my workplace to get the time I will start working and it will be September 2nd, so I will be away from Skype much longer than expected, but it's ok, because I will be here, in this blog. I also went to the store to buy a Blueteeth card for blue teeth applications, so I can work on my secret project thingy. Yay!

Err... oh, and K.A., I REALLY want that chapter soon. I dunno... ask Kirby to motivate you or something. I want it done by Saturday. I will remind you everyday until I have received it as a PM or in a e-mail. Ok? It's getting rediculous. Also, it would be nice if F.D. came here to say hi, once in a while. I dunno if he knows this place exists, but whatever... it would be nice too. Err... I think that's all I had to say. Soory for horrible grammar. Brain is kinda deady.

Cya for today and return tomorrow for another entry of this blog place.

Ciao!

Welcome!

Welcome to my new home! Well... this place is nothing new, I admit, but for the next two or three weeks, it will be the only place I will have access to, so I'm making it my new base of operation. Most of the things I will post won't have anything to do with my story, but whatever... it's my blog and I do whatever I want with it. Today, I pretty much have nothing else to say, but I probably will have something to talk about tomorrow.

On a side note, I am working on a new personal project. I gathered some of the material I need today at my University electronic equipment depot. I will need a few more things, but I will have to go to an electronic store for that. What is this project about? You will know in time.

It seems that I did have something to talk about. Oh well... see ya!

Finally...

Finals are over!!! Yay! Now, it's beer time... err... I mean... I'm going to go home and calmly go back to writing my story... while drinking alchoolized drinks. Well... half the bottle remaining in my dorm, because I can't leave it there and I can't move it from there, because the top is broken. So, either I throw it away, I put it in a sealing container or I drink it. Since I don't like to waste things and that I don't have a sealing container, I'm going to drink those 5 oz of beer. Yay for being cheap!

...

To my defense, I'm not going to touch the 3 unopened beers in my fridge. I think my mom will like to have those. So, it makes a gift... yay for being cheap again!

EDIT: Well... I did not write my story... but I drank that evil drink of the devil, so now, at least I'm free of seeing that thing waste itself in the fridge. I'm not too proud of myself, but, I think I was too tired to write my story anyway. I will give another shot at it tomorrow. For now... sleepy time! (go in sleepy world)

Pichu!

I'm in a pichu mood and people were doing this, so...

1. What is your character's name?

Miya

2. What is your character's name in another language?

Chupii (What? Pichu have their language...)

3. How old is he/she?

Depends. A few months as a pichu, though she has been seen to be a teen or a child in some places.

4. What is your character's race/species?

Pichu

5. Do they have a crush?

No, though she likes a pichu named Jolt.

6. Do they have many friends?

A few, but other pichu are, according to her, "stupid".

7. What planet is your character from?

Earth. (though one could say Pokemon World, I guess)

8. Does your character like to eat?

Yes, a lot, especially if she's around apples.

9. What's his/her favorite food?

Apple

10. What's his/her favorite drink?

Her mother's milk.

11. Is your character annoying?

She can be when she's being playful

13. Is your character loved?

By other pichu, yes. By her parents, yes. But you are a predator, you probably don't like her. She messed up.

14. Is your character hated?

Hating a pichu?

15. Is she/he emo/goth?

She can be sad because of her gift and the pain it can be at times, but otherwise, she's cheerful, like any other pichu.

16. Is she/he straight, bisexual, or gay?

Straight. I didn't see a gay pokemon yet.

17. Is she/he a virgin?

...she's a child...

18. Name 3 hobbies:

Playing, eating and being mishevious with her psychic powers

19. Is your character normal?

A psychic pichu with more power than the average human gifted individul? Hardly normal.

20. Is your character attractive?

I would say, cute.

21. How does your character handle emotions?

She can, most of the time, as required by the control of her gift. She can lose it at times, but it will be more like sadness about how different she is from the other pichu.

22. Does your character have other forms?

Maybe...

23. Does your character overreact?

Being a pichu, overreacting kinda defines what she is. Everything around her is something special.

24. Is your character a criminal?

Some may say she is. She does steal knowledge from other, even if she knows it's bad.

26. What's his/her IQ?

Close to the average human's (which makes her a genius among pichu)

27. Does your character have a disease/curse?

She's gifted and with very little in a pichu body to control it.

28. Is your character dead?

...

29. Does your character have a family?

Yup. Her parents are-- (is kinapped by the plot ninjas)

30. Has he/she encountered any tragic times in life?

I'm not sure... maybe learning to control her gift. She was outcasted for being weird and that wasn't fun.

31. What's the best time in your character's life?

About... now, since she's an innocent pichu.

32. If you could name 1 friend, which would you relate to your character?

I would says Ramira, for the cheerfulness, but even there, it's not really close.

33. Is your character single?

Again, she's a pichu!

34. Has he/she developed any relationships?

Pichu!

35. Does he/she have an element?

Electricity? Duh!

36. Do you roleplay your character?

Yes!

37. Do you write about your character?

Maybe...

38. Does your character have a bad temper at times?

Being a child, she can be impatient at times.

39. Does your character get depressed?

It happened before, but like I said, it's more like sadness.

40. What's your characters favorite animal?

Pikachu. She wants to be one.

41. Does your character have any fears?

She's scared of that hole in a nearby tree... but seriously, not really.

42. Does your character have any weaknesses?

Her gift and and naivety.

43. Does your character look up to anyone?

Her father and her mother.

44. Does your character like music?

Yes.

45. What's your character's favorite type of music?

Chu tribal songs.

46. Is he/she impatient?

Yes, I believe I mentioned that already.

47. What's something funny about your character?

She's cute, innocent looking, but she can be powerful and deadly. I think it's funny.

48. Name 5 nicknames

5? Err...

49. Does your character curse?

Is "Awwww...." cursing?

50. This test is over, what does your character have to say?

Awww.... I was having fun... (sees a friend) Yay! (runs to him/her)

Feeling better, but tired... and I've got cake!

Somehow, I got through this evil week alive. I guess it means that I am a survivor... or something. While today's Final probably killed my A+ (though I may still get an A), I think I fared fairly well despite the special circumstances making me nervous and stressed (and don't get me started about nightmares...) So, in celebration, I will eat this imaginary cake from Kirby's birthday. (eat cake) Mmmm... this cake may be a lie, but it tastes great. I think I will put the rest here for people to have a share. Speaking of sharing, I think I shared chapter 13 with K.A. for a last proofreading using his TTS thingy. I wonder if he is done with that. I would like to at least have that posted before I leave home in a few days. It's a bit unfair that people are waiting for months, while I am writing chapter 16... (eat some more cake)