Chapter 14 Posted!

Hello, everyone !

I posted chapter 14 today, it seems. So, like with every chapter, comes the mendatory review responses we all love and hug. Well, if you don’t, I sure do. I’ve made them all with love and hugged them before letting them go in the Whole Wild Web (yeah, I changed the acronym on purpose). So, here they are ! I even gave the section a nifty title.

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Review Response Corner !

HelKat: Yeah, Kagai is the coolest and bestest Umbreon ever ! Some people out there would make a website dedicated to her greatness. (glare at few friends of mine) . Seriously though, those espeons were meanies. I think that if Kagai sees them one day, she should throw a Shadow Ball at them, even if she technically can’t in my universe. It would be for lolz.

P.S. : I always wanted to say lolz.

Cathycalamitous : Thanks for your support and your nice words. Rick won’t become Ash’s pikachu though, or else that would be entering the land of cliche too much. I try to be original, even if some of my ideas are not. Oh well… I dunno if you will see this, since I those are reviews for earlier chapters and my blog wasn’t advertised back then, but I didn’t plan this eventually. Blame the plan.

Foxyjosh: A bird joining ? Do you want him dead or something ? Sometime, I wonder if Rick is liked… hmmm… (think about all the times he acted like an ass) mmm… maybe he kinda deserves it, for now. Though, I admit that this chapter was cute. I had fun writing about Kagai and Sunny playing with Sparky. It was a breath of fresh air.

AltoGuardian: I wonder what the prize is myself. I had an idea, but I forgot and I can’t remember it. I’m sure that I will get another one until it ends, hopefully, because it would suck to have won without receiving the prize. I would look like a liar. Now on with the review response. I think you made it a point that Jen and Kagai are good. I think that everyone reached that conclusion by now. That’s why I like them so much. Rick is stupid for not seeing how much good friends they are. I hope he does before the end of the story. I realize that he is kind of ‘evil’ since a few chapters back, but I think he can be better. Not perfectly good like Jen, but kinda better than : « Get out of my way, I’m Sparktail and I rock ! » It shouldn’t be too hard. And look, it took only one week before the next chapter !

Kirby: Who are you ? You didn’t sign the review and now I’m all confused ! For that. I’m going to sic Jen on you, since Miya is on vacation in Pichu Land. (sic Jen on you) Anyway, Mr. Anonymous, it’s a good thing that you think the chapter is good. If I wish I could play with Kagai and Jen, too… err.. wait.. forget I said anything. Sparktail had to be good to Kagai and Jen, because I threatened him of spending two days in a box without light. (look at chapter 14) Sparky ! You are so going in the box ! (lock him up in there) By the way, I fixed that mistake with the separator. I hate it when it’s cut like that.

P.S. : Yeah, it was hard, but I have seen worse from you at times. Not here, but… you know what I mean, Mr. Anonymous… Eevee. (smirk and turn you into one and then leave you to Jen)

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Before I continue, the plot ninja have a very important message to say.

Plot Ninja : If you haven’t read chapter 14 yet, DO NOT READ THE FOLLOWING TEXT! You have been warned. (poofs away in a screen of smoke)

Hehe… maybe I should have a Plot Pirate, too. They would be having a war and I would get to watch them while eating popcorn.

Oh well, it has been a very long road from Pallet town to the forests south of Mt Moon, but it seems that it’s all over for Jen, Kagai, Sunny and the other pokemon we don’t care about. (sorry, Steamer and Leafty). Since you have taken time to read this, I will reveal to you a little secret: they are not gone from the story forever. They will be back eventually. It will be hard to tolerate Sparky’s selfishness until then, but here’s another little secret: This time alone will affect him in some way, so stay on your toes. I still have plenty of surprises in my bag. I wish I could say more, but the plot Ninjas are watching me, and they kind of scare me.

Oh… I changed the question of the poll. This one is a bit unrelated, but I thought it was funny. Who’s the most evil character? You decide!

Ciao!

-DPL