Chapter 15 posted!

Hi, everyone!

I just posted chapter 15, so go read it! This chapter is full of… well… it’s… kind of… I will be honest, this is the chapter where the less interesting stuff happens. I wouldn’t say this chapter is boring, but it serves its purpose: setting the stage for the rest of the story, in which each chapter is full of stuff and there are plot twists everywhere. Well, maybe not everywhere, but still, a lot of stuff happens. To make up for this, I promise that I will give you chapter 16 as soon I get it from Tyler. So, who knows, there might be another chapter in 2-3 days. Oh well… let’s cheer up the mood with Review Responses! Woo!

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Review Response Corner 2: The Return of the Responses!

Foxyjosh : Most likely, we will never get that answer. Or we may… I don’t really know, since I haven’t decided of that yet. But I can tell you that those soldiers are evil people doing evil stuff… I don’t like the army very much, so it kind of show in my story. Oh well… have fun with the next chapter!

AltoGuardian : Yay! I love long reviews! Watch out, Kirb, this guy may get the « reviewer of year 2008 » award! Ok… back into the topic. You are one of the people who voted for Rick as being the most evil character, aren’t you? If not, well, I’m sure you would have voted that. So… yeah… you pretty must got the gist of it. Jen, Kagai, sunny and the others are screwed and Sparktail isn’t going to help them. Yeah… if I hadn’t written the rest of the story and that Sparky wasn’t a part of me and a character I like I a lot, I would try to capture him too, though I would feed him to Kagai. It’s more efficient than just killing him.

Anyway… now Sparky is back as the main assh--- character and he is scared to death. Things are going pretty well for him. Hey, better than that, and he would be stuck by lightning and actually be injured. Though you can’t hut him, I allow you to fictionally hunt him in your head where his fictional death doesn’t affect the flow of the story. I would gladly roleplay that with you, but you would have to be into text roleplaying and we should have to share e-mails address and find a IM to RP on and that would be a lot of trouble. Though, I’m always open to new stuff, so my story e-mail address is sparktail@gmail.com. Yes, it’s that simple. So much that I also took sparktail@hotmail.com and sparktail@yahoo.com too (not sure about that one, though). Anyway, those e-mails are also good for anyone wanting to send Sparktail some e-mails to insult him or something. Just so people know.

I think I got a bit distracted here… where was I? Oh yeah… God knowing he needs to be better. Well, I guess it depends on which God you are talking about. Some would be happy about Sparky’s way of life. I don’t approve them, but it was important to mention. What’s next… hmm… oh, you can rant about Rick as long you want. The chu is so selfish he probably sees this as a praise, because someone is talking about him. I think those rants are funny, too, and they make me write long review responses, which I love! (hug response)

Alright… so now I reached the actual review! Aww… that’s the most boring part. I liked the beginning with the soldiers too, but I think I might have been a bit flawed. It wasn’t as serious as I wanted it to be. Kagai talking about eating Rick is kind of a running gag of mine. Well... in truth, it’s more than a gag to me, but well… I love seeing stuff being eaten and.. er… oh look, I’m changing the subject! This response is now about how confusing Sparky can be! I will admit (again, I think) that his dreams and his animal logic are a bit… weird, if not even lacking common sense, but that’s mostly because his logic is screwed (the rest is my inability to clearly explain something that isn’t obvious).

Thanks for saying that my chapter was good! I appreciate your constructive comments and your rants! Really, I should really work on giving you something. Maybe preview of chapters before anyone else? That would be cool. Or I could give you a cookie. Those are plentiful on the Internet. Oh and, it’s ok if you do atrociously long chapters, because I do atrociously long reviews responses and chapters, so it’s all good. Have fun reading chapter 15! (or have fun waiting for 16, if you have read 15 already.)

P.S.: Wow, that must be my longest review response ever! Yay!

Kira: Hi, Kira! I missed ya! There has been that weirdo reviewing chapter 13 and it freaked me out. It’s a good thing that freak is gone. He scared poor little Sparky. He missed ya, too. Umm… so, a lot happened? Wait until you see chapter 17 or 18 (I don’t remember which one. Maybe it’s both), a lot happen in them. Actually, a lot happen after the beginning of the chapter 17, because the main point of the story is resolved there and the rest is a mix of good, bad, sad and funny stuff, in no particular order. Well, it’s pretty much the same as before, but with slightly more fun. That little mention about Jen moving in her sleep did come from our RP, since that’s where it became part of the character. Sparky left, yes, but he wouldn’t have been able to do anything against the guns anyway, neither would have a fully awake Kagai. A bullet is faster than any pokémon. (those were darts, but you get the point) We will see what happens with Sparky soon… like… in this chapter! Whoo! Thanks for the review!

P.S.: Watch out for the guy above you! I think he is trying to do stuff…

Tyler: OMG! You are in the past! You are kind of time-traveled and stuff! Wow! I’m all impressed! I think Sparky is being more and more pikachu each chapter. I tried to tell him, but he was pouting because I didn’t give him his berry and he wouldn’t listen. This pikachu needs to be tamed, really. There will be some happiness down the road, just be more patient. It’s the key! (well actually, you will soon have all my chapters, so you will know before anyone else, but that’s the advantage of being my proofreader.) Have fun with the rest of the proofreading, though. How quick I post the last chapters depends on you!

ShadowBlueShane: Hi, new reviewer! It’s nice to see you. It’s nice to see any new reviewer. It gives me more inputs and happiness, but mostly happiness, because the story is done and there’s very little to input in it. 6 hours to read the whole thing? Wow, you are quick! (or maybe I am slow) Kagai and Sparky are my favorite characters, too. Well, I like Jen a lot, too. My favorite characters are, in order:

1. Sparktail
2. Jen and Kagai and Miya
3. Magic and Sunny and Amper and Shocky and… well… pretty much every character I created. I love them all! (hug all of them)

Sparktail got his story, since he is number one and Jen, Kagai and Miya might get their own mini-stories. I’m thinking about something right now for Jen and Kagai and I will try to write the first chapter of something as soon I’m done with revising the last chapters of Sparking Chaos. As for Miya… err… well… that’s my secret character. Who is she? Maybe one day people will know. Don’t tell anyone I told you this! It’s a secret! (try to hide this response behind a flower pot)

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Those… were long… but so much fun! (shed a tear) They were so great. It’s moving. Now, instead of doing like last chapter and posting post-chapter comments here, I will talk about it tomorrow, so it gives people some time to actually read the chapter (point at Kirby)

Ciao!

- DPL (aka Ricky, Sparky and that guy)