Friday, August 29, 2008

Chapter 16 of Sparking Chaos posted!

Hello again everyone (for the third time today)

I'm out of words to say, so let's have the review responses right now. I wonder if Sparky should do those, since Kagai is doing the other ones...

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Review Response Corner!

HelKat: Well, maybe this chapter will tell where I am going... or probably not. But, if you want to know what happens to Jen, I posted a new story called Fractured Bond talking about it. Maybe you don't know, since I didn't see you review there. Oh well... if you didn't know, now you do!

Foxyjosh: Wow... that was a meaningful comment. Well, if you insist, first of all, Sparky is going to be killed by the evil squirrels living inside the Big Tree. Then, Strongclaw will rise to power and conquer the pokeworld. But, in the darkest times, a hero named Kagai will appear and overthrow Strongclaw to bring peace to the pokeworld. And she will eat him. The end.

Kirby: I knew about the genetic diversity thing, but I forgot to talk about it. Sue me. (read the rest) Yeah, it's an established fact by now that Sparky sucks. I think I will write it somewhere obvious. Sparky is based on me? Damn, it means I'm selfish, egocentrical and a dirtbag... oh wait, that's what I am! I can be generous and kind, too... (point at Jen) Lovely is something I added to her, though. I don't have that. Well... I hope not. I would freak out if someone called me lovely.

PS: You have FB now for eevee... well... had.
PPS: Hey... you have read about Kagai and Jen! Cheers up!

Altoguardian: You know, I love to reply to reviews, but seven in a row drain someone, I tell you. About Rick being eaten, I could have that in the deleted scenes, but some scenes in that set are inapropriate for kids. I must thank you back for not ranting about Rick... much. Dr. Evil is not evil anymore, though... Being in a colony won't help Kagai and Jen. They can do it themselves, probably. Sparky's case is a bit special, when it comes to mind and human memories.. you will see soon. As to your questions, it has been only 10-11 days. I blame my slow posting. Thanks for the review!

PS: You wanted Jen, you got her.

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Phew... I'm done... it took some time... Enjoy this chapter! The next one is coming Monday, since FB is going to finish soon and allows me to go with the rest of this unspoiled.

Ciao!

-DPL

5 comments:

Kirby Oak said...

Lovely.

DarkPokemonLover said...

AHHHHH!!!!! I quit! From now on, someone random is going to answer your reviews, Kirb!

Kirby Oak said...

Can it be Jen?

DarkPokemonLover said...

It's going to be someone I think is important in each chapter... I already know who in which chapter.

17: Psywave
18: Magic
19: Jen
20: Bill

If someone reads this, it could give hints about what is going to happen next.

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