Chapter 5 of Fractured Bond posted!

Hello!

Yet another chapter from me today. You people will be sad when my vaction will be over in a few days. Until then...

I have to admit that I have a bad feeling about this chapter. I don't know... maybe my writting is not par to what I offered before or maybe it is the typos (even if I checked it twice). I am happy with the content, but... I dunno... something feels weird. Oh well... readers will be the judges in the end.

Now for the review responses!

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Kagai's Review Response Corner

Kirby: ... What kind of review is that? Bad Kirb! (bite you)

Foxyjosh: Event turned? Wow... That must be a pretty thing to see. Prettier than the things I see in here.

Kirby: Again? Oh... that's a better review. Now I'm happy! (smile) I'm going to let you see Oran, like you wanted too. (Oran walks in and waits for petting. I groom him) Now... Oh... it's called Lost Review... I wonder why... I'm sure you did that on purpose, you crazy eevee-fan. (bite you) Who is sounding like who? You are confusing. And Rocket uniform? Is someone eventually going to tell me what a Rocket is? It's confusing... Jen can't be confused by the name, because she doesn't care about the human, only the pikachu. I only care the chu too. He was tasty looking.

That guy seemed evil. I never met him, but by judging on what you said, I would probably want to kill him if he was trapped in the same room as me. (sharpen her claws) Oh... if she was an eevee, she would try to steal Oran away from me. (growl at Jen) Shoo! He's mine! Oh, speaking of Jen...
Jen: Aww... I love you too, Kirb! (accept the hug and kiss you)

PS: I guess I forgive you. Oran is there.

PPS: Jen: (accept this other hug and kiss you again) I will miss you... (go back to becoming a pikachu)

AltoGuardian: Jen is going to become a pikachu? Ohh... well... I heard she liked being eaten, so maybe she won't complain too much when I will kill her. I will go soft on her, I promise. If I see her, that's it. I don't know either where this is going to go, but we had good meat so far... but I dunno... Sunny and Oran have been acting strange... I hope it's nothing bad. DPl won't be able to update daily in a few days, but he will try one chapter every 2 or 3 days.

P.S.: I missed the mention of Rick. now, I have no pikachu to eat. (think about Jen) Hmm...

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Well, there you go. The review responses are gone. I think I'm lacking ending messages too... oh well, I will still have my trusty ciao. Ciao!

-DPL