Saturday, August 9, 2008

Writting and review fest

Hello, people.

Today, I finished writting chapter 16. I think this chapter is meh, as in, the action is cool, but I don't think I wrote it exactly like I wanted to. Oh well, that's why revising is there. I will start chapter 17 tomorrow. In other news, I have send chapter 14 for a final proofreading and I hope K.A. has at least downloaded the document... speaking of chapter 14, I will insert a random teaser, riiiight.... here.

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Kagai, however, didn't care much about his explanations. She was tired and she wanted to get back to sleep. Arguing with the rodent wasn't something fun to do and, if he didn't want to listen to common sense, he could just do whatever he wanted, as long it meant she could sleep again. "Oh Sparky, just go ahead, be stupid and go outside alone. If you happen to get eaten, don't forget to shout my name so I can come help with the eating." she told Sparktail half-jokingly, closing her eyes again.

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Kagai is one big meanie, isn't she? The first one to answer yes to that question, I will hit him or her.

Oh well... I received 6 reviews, by the way. That's cool, I guess. Ciao!

6 comments:

Kirby Oak said...

Yup. She's one big, fluffy, cuddly, cute, cool, awesome, eevee-lution-tastic meanie. (Hold up a Kagai plushie as a shield)

The wheneverly Kaz said...

(steals the plush) Kagai is in THIS chapter too?! I didn't even need the TTS for the last one. And neither will I this time. Deadline: Tuesday.

DarkPokemonLover said...

No plush stealing in my blog! Bad K.A.! Give it back to Kirby! He needs it on his trip.

And Kirby... (hit you with a folder newspaper) I said no! It's bad to say that!

People those days... (playful grin)

Kirby Oak said...

"Those" days? In case you've forgotten, I'm not from another time, anymore.

((Sorry... I know picking on your English is kinda a low blow, but I can't help it sometimes...))

DarkPokemonLover said...

Oh... was the right word "these"?

Kirby Oak said...

Yeah...